Hello there! I had to give my two cents here, the character's right hand is definitely broken :p Even considering the position of the arm while holding the weapon, the hand doesn't form a 90-degree angle with the forearm. It's actually more diagonal. Drawing it at 90 degrees (maybe not exactly, but close to it) is what makes the hand look broken. On the other hand, the armor feels very flat. You can't really see its three-dimensional form because you're not considering how the armor wraps around the body, and therefore the overall volume isn't being taken into account. Also, keep the center line in mind. If you draw the center line following the curved shape of the torso, it will help make the chest plate look more rounded. And be careful with the position of the feet. The character's right foot should be facing toward the viewer rather than being turned sideways. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback