Hi there—I’m certainly no professional, but I think I can offer some help. When dealing with poses involving perspective, you can visualize the torso as a tube; if it tilts forward, certain parts will be obscured—you won't see the entire torso. In this case, the figure is leaning forward in a three-quarter view. I shifted the head slightly lower because, in the original drawing, it looked too upright; the neck is partially hidden, and the shoulders sit higher up. I also adjusted the arm position to make the pose clearer and easier to read. Finally, I added more shading to suggest light coming from above; this creates a greater sense of distance between body parts, helping to convey that feeling of depth. | Artwod Feedback