Hello there! Great job! I really like how you executed the technique in this portrait. :) As for the values, I'd recommend increasing the contrast in the shadows a bit more. Right now, the shadow on the neck has much stronger contrast than the shadows on the face, which makes the lighting feel a little inconsistent. In my paintover, I painted based on what I believe is the direction of the light source, as indicated by the shadow on the neck. If that wasn't your intended lighting direction, it can still serve as an example of how stronger shadows could look, regardless of which lighting direction you choose. I hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback