Hello there! I really like how it's looking so far! As for the composition, I wouldn't crop the character's elbow. I'd include it within the canvas instead. I would also increase the lighting on the characters a bit, and fix the cast shadow on the character in the background. Based on the shadow underneath the nose, it looks like the light is coming from his left side. Adding a few reddish strands to the hair would also help make the lighting feel more consistent. :) On the other hand, I'd add a glow to the floating object. It doesn't quite make sense to me that the characters are being illuminated by red light while the object itself doesn't seem to emit any light—assuming the red light is coming from the object, of course. Also, be careful with the position of the character's arm and hand, as the anatomy is a bit off there. Ideally, the hand should be rotated slightly, and the forearm should connect properly to the upper arm. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback