Hey there! I really like the illustration! :) However, correcting the shadows would definitely help improve it. :) I'd also define the underside of the jaw a bit more clearly. Notice that I painted the shadows a little darker so they blend better with the shadows you already have on the side of the face and neck. Adding shadows around the eyes, under the nose, in the cast shadow from the nose, and along the lower part of the lips helps give the face more volume. Also, try to avoid painting the eyes almost pure white. Even adding a bit of shadow to the eyes can help improve their sense of volume. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback