@mhgudegude

“clarifying your shadow shapes and light source will help the fabric read better! I also removed one of the pillows, giving more information about her other arm and then putting the pillow on top of he...”

“Its not that its too dark, but when you put the piece into b/w, its majority midtones. I dont think you need to go back into the rendering, but adding a multiply layer (or adjusting the curves setting...”

“The eye placement is definitely working well in this piece! For the face, your next step may be to work on the nose. Since you picked a pose where we are looking down at her, you see little to none of...”

“I would work on really pushing the perspective of the simple shapes youre making in your pencil sketches, instead of creating the rib cage (which is a great way to start) using boxes for the pelvis an...”