Hi! I think you have a really good base- I can tell that the characters have distinct personalities and their posing tells me a bit about their relationship (cute!). What's unfortunate about the current composition is that Lena(?) looks like she's pretty far from Reme and that I can't say they're actually looking at each other. If you make Reme face up (and turn his chest upward too), really push his pupils towards Lena, and bring Lena right behind Reme by drawing her a bit bigger, their relationship will feel closer too. You might have to fix Lena's pose or proportions to show her size better, but bringing them closer (position wise) will also make it easier for your audience to see their size difference, which can be another hint to their personality and relationship. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback