Hey there! I actually love your delicate rendering and I’m absolutely in love with the color palette. I think it fits the character really well I think the problem has to do with construction, if you draw a centerline from the forehead to the chin you will notice that her nose and mouth are walking away. I also adjusted the light a bit cause in your case it’s not really clear where is the light source. I still tried to keep your delicate shadows As for rendering, I would suggest adding lighter outline on the eyebrows But those are minor things and your portrait and color scheme are awesome Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback